I was framed from
The deep soul of my creator
And from the deep core of an endless ocean in his heart
For the possession to enlighten
The steady sleeping world
And to apprise and awake it for its rejuvenation.
I was made glamorous,accurate and apt by care
With Horde of words accrued
To echo into the world
Now it was the time when
The bond of physical contact was detached
And he sent me as a father
with the feeling both sweet and sour.
I gazed and relocated as harbinger
For fruition of my father
And tried to alter the minds
Through my truncheon "The text".
The literature witness for my transition
And the world for being genial
From centuries,I've been proverbial
For my infinite forms
And I loose my existence
For service of humanity
I have always left my impalpable nature
To change into nature,love and your life.
Nice poem.Well thought of.Keep up the good work of thinking & penning them at the same time.
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Spirit!!!
thanx to arjun,neha and futuretheearth!
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ReplyDelete"And tried to alter the minds
ReplyDeleteThrough my truncheon "The text". "
..... nailed it :)
Thanx a lot!!
ReplyDeletei'm glad that u liked it :)