Ambient waves of poem

Ambient waves of poem
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Sunday 4 December 2011

poem of the poem

I was framed from
The deep soul of my creator 
And from the deep core of an endless ocean in his heart
For the possession to enlighten
The steady sleeping world
And to apprise and awake it for its rejuvenation.

I was made glamorous,accurate and apt by care
With Horde of words accrued
To echo into the world
Now it was the time when 
The bond of physical contact was detached
And he sent me as a father 
with the feeling both sweet and sour.

I gazed and relocated as harbinger
For fruition of my father
And tried to alter the minds 
Through my truncheon  "The text".

The literature witness for my transition 
And the world for being genial
From centuries,I've been proverbial
For my infinite forms
And I loose my existence
For service of humanity
I have always left my impalpable nature 
To change into nature,love and your life.

29 comments:

  1. Nice poem.Well thought of.Keep up the good work of thinking & penning them at the same time.

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  2. Thanks a lot for your encouraging comment sir.

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  3. awesome poem yaar...............keep it up

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  4. very deep thinking raman.... keep it up

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  5. nice poem...
    very interesting poem...
    keep writing...
    Spirit!!!

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  6. thanx to arjun,neha and futuretheearth!

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  7. your welcome...
    you can call me kris....

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  8. awesome yaar...amazing!!!! keep entertaining us through these type of awesome poems!!!!

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  9. Nice personification of the poem....deep human feelings have been expressed. Keep it up

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  10. Thanx @ desi_ssj (Ankit) and himanshu!

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  11. great work and the last stanza is my favourite...

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  12. Nice poem Raman... :)
    Happy Blogging..!!

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  13. kya baat ha...tu talented ha bahi....

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  14. @sameer-hmmm...vo to mai pehle b tha..par tujhe abhi pata chala..lol! neways thanx

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  15. Hey, I'm a new blogger, a poet whose just getting started. I found this poem deeply spiritual, it has a great detail to it that makes the words powerful.
    I'd love your opinion on my poetry if you have the time.
    http://annaaainafairytalee.blogspot.com/

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  16. @annaaainafairytalee- Thank u sooo much mam for your kind words of appreciation! i would love to visit ur blog.

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  17. "And tried to alter the minds
    Through my truncheon "The text". "
    ..... nailed it :)

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  18. Thanx a lot!!
    i'm glad that u liked it :)

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